Talk:CH391L/S14/Cellcountingmemory
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--drewtack (talk) 14:13, 24 March 2014 (CDT)Overall this is pretty good, the first think I noticed is that I can not see the images without clicking on them to make it larger. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, (?), but my initial thought is you might want to make these particular images to be large enough to read the figures. But, between this and your presentation I definitely have a better understanding of counters.
- Jeffrey Barrick (talk) 14:40, 24 March 2014 (CDT) Can you investigate papers for counting the number of cell divisions that have happened... with the application of causing cells to die after they divide a certain number of times?
- --Dennis Mishler (talk) 13:40, 25 March 2014 (CDT)Relating to Drew's comments, I would number the figures: Fig 1, 2, 3... And Figures 2 and 3 are not easy to read in the page. When clicking on the figures, they get larger and are legible. However, see if you can improve the in-page figures. Also, the legends need more description. Ok, so Figure 2 is a "genetic counter based on transcription", what does that mean? What is happening? A couple of sentences of description would go a long way.
- --Dennis Mishler (talk) 13:40, 25 March 2014 (CDT) What other transcriptional counting methods have been developed? You say there are a few... I would love to see alternative methods.
- --Dennis Mishler (talk) 13:40, 25 March 2014 (CDT) For your future directions, perhaps include a figure or some more information or a model on what could be done or what people are trying to do.
- --Mindy (talk) 16:52, 27 March 2014 (CDT)Very thorough- I would suggest possibly rewording the sentence under counting that begins with "counters," the wording is difficult to follow.
Also in the Intro perhaps exchange "certain natural occurrences" to "certain naturally occurring"?
